Open Poetry #44 |
From That Night Forth |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
From That Night Forth I could not know that she'd be there upon that night. I knew not how much she would please me and be such a delight. Sliding in next to me just to gain my attention, rubbing off on me in her beautiful presentation. Before the evening was over I touched her to make sure that she was real, and I kissed her just to see how it would feel. From that night forth this woman was the healer of my soul and the lover of my heart. My beautiful lover, my darling sweetheart. JamesLee 05January 2009 "Sometimes all I need is the air that I breathe and to love you."...The Hollies' Greatest Hits. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
It's a very beautiful love poem you have there Excellent flow Very well penned
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're a great romance writer James. Simple but so well expressed. Eric |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
great read, inspire me... yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very sweet, dear James! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey James.... Thought I'd drop in once agin.... Beautiful and romantic as so many of your s are.....Very enjoyable read. I remember the Hollies very well... Just one look that's all it took Yeah just one look that's all it took I thought I was dreamin but I musta been wrong yea yea OR something like that. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It would appear, that you both give as well as you get! ~ and that is a gooood thang! Ain't love grand! Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Anniepimm, ethome, 2islander2, Margherita, ethome and Earth Angel for the wonderful responses...James |
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