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dawn sighed fine fifty
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dawn sighed fine fifty |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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cello dramatically as a hawking wind strumming your palms across this dawn you leaned into my eyes more deeply now not as much of wing to flee my pen perhaps there was a trusting moment's button that you would push to validate this agony the sweet and gentle tender sleeving kind that we would unravel within your august just a lover's sip of your fine fifty room temperature’d without sun in windows and would my mind have such unsure hands to worship the vase as much as the wine would my poems be back to back tomorrows with mirrors would they make the moments we folded into a vagrants reality our own secret sand of glass castles covering their pebbles with our rippling _______________ daark (circle of palms series) |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I remember why I don't always respond... generally because you leave me speechless.  Loving this, thanking you... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..now I must find a way to steal your speachless thanks babe!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ohhhh! This series is really something special among all of your incredible work. It looks like you put your heart into it. Awesome. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms mar..thanks lady friend!! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I have read this and it haunts me. A poem that captures but can not be captured. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..thanks babe |
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