Open Poetry #44 |
Wind Chaser |
WindWalker11 Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 41 |
The wind was always a rival to defeat, so I ran the path set forth, training for the marathon of life to cross the finish line on some distant horizon, and I imagined turning back to see a tired wind come in second. But in trying so hard to finish first, I never could pause long enough, to appreciate the simple things that had no need to run in any race. One day a gust of wind gently passing by whispered softly in my ear: “Learn to run with me, not against me. Don’t worry about who finishes first! If you must run along my paths, let me be your companion, not your competitor! Allow the pleasure to flow within life’s own gentle pace. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I love this. A lovely message whispered softly,the type of advice we hear and really bend to. "late" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So much lovely wisdom here, WW. Your thoughts are like that gentle wind that that touches my spirit with truth and hope. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WW Eleven, here again I find myself saving another of your electrifying, spirit poems. I literally get goosebumples when I read your poetry. It truly speaks to me on a soul level. I do believe that Spirit speaks through you. "I never could pause long enough, to appreciate the simple things" ~ Yes, we should stop and smell the lemongrass, so to speak. "“Learn to run with me, not against me. Don’t worry about who finishes first! If you must run along my paths, let me be your companion, not your competitor! Allow the pleasure to flow within life’s own gentle pace." ~ The Wind whispered wise words into your ears, dear One Who Walks With the Wind. Love & Wind, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Life-wise words, WW, befitting your pen name. ~have a great year~ |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Excellent flow of words really enjoyed this write Wonderfully penned... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
yes ... very well writ! sustained applause!! |
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