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Open Poetry #44

Sick of Seduction

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

0 posted 2009-01-27 08:40 PM

The attire of a sinner,
and the smile of a winner,
grace in a seductive strut,
make-up beauty in a rut.

Fiery eyes just getting by,
the only way is with a sigh.
God's given angel features
help arouse the wealthy creatures.

Disliked transgressions
make up the work sessions.
Taking control of the soul,
sins spearing an empty hole.

Prayers raised to the Lord
to bring down his sword,
and slash away this guilty world.
She's sick of being twisted and twirled.

Marc-Andre
Senior Member

since 2008-12-07

Posts 501

1 posted 2009-01-27 09:07 PM

An interesting piece, I like those lines:

God's given angel features
help arouse the wealthy creatures.

Have a marvelous day! Mark

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-01-27 09:10 PM

Thanks Mark! Your comments mean alot.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-01-27 11:51 PM

"The attire of a sinner,
and the smile of a winner,
grace in a seductive strut,
make-up beauty in a rut."

~ I get the picture! lol You painted her very well! I was intrigued at the get-go!

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