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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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shhhhh, leave the moment in quiet, quixote while the maiden is cinderellaing there where the lady trees are her gypsies spending their finger limbs in strum of her laughter dare I rattle my keys and wake my demons will they startle the robin that contemplates as the lady sways to summer samba songs dancing bare foot in her high heel jaunty and dare I capture her gaze in my fragile vase pretending to be but a moment under palms while she wears the saliva of a jealous god on her bosom valley's hierarchy shhhh, leave the moment in quiet, quixote drop your metal shield on the clattering windows and spur wildly the stallions of your mind quietly be the thunder at her peaceful places lest she never knows your poems as gentle arrows __________________ daark (circle of palms) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ahhh, dare, please, as this left goodsebumps...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...geesebumpery is my favorite recogniton...thanks lady!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful ending...may your aim be excellent...nicely written... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks guy!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
a very beautiful gifting Mr Daark.. thank you  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
dulcinea sighed the undreamt of adventure peril or promise? Indigo Mmm... wild horses and windmills. Liking your literary bent here, D. ;-) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks lady friend _____________ ms indi... the dulci shivering seems to be the mouth of dawn perhaps just a smile be the dove sounds I understand that literally bent is better than literary broken? |
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