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Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2009-01-24 08:00 PM

Who are you
where the winter
of your eyes
holds both day,

and night,

or whose hips
curve perfectly,
for my hands
to hold,

and grasp,

so tight.

Whose lips vermillion
are those,
who frame
the inaugurate,

the wishful tunnel,
of oral comingling,

a voice of corsage,
and serene coloratura.

Unmask
your perturbation
and whisper me
your perfume,

of naked words.

Butt up your body
of dialect
against mine
and press your,

chant

against my lingual,
so cunning.

Under swollen moon,
parted,
let writhe,
our collaboration.

Let clinch and throb
my joint
effort,

into your internal draft
of slushy pondering

as we masticate
motif,

and conceptions.

I am the body feel
of bloom,
and coitus

laying next to you,
behind you,

pinning you against,
your will,
and hesitations,

non interuptus.

As I've become
the restless
in your legs,
the subconscious
weeping
inside,

and in between,

the ravage in your sleep
the pent up comeuppance,
climactic,

the emancipated discharge,
of our fervor coalesce,

unseen.

Let me release
the tight clothing
of reluctance,

the sheared mound
of poise,
and gratifications,

as we finally engage,
in our own,

pas de deux,

whoever you are,

my love here,
will always be,

for you.

As I sit here,
wet from mist,

once part, of the sky.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2009-01-24 08:34 PM

I would venture to say that there are more border-line words in this write than I have ever noticed in one place before.

I had to read it when no one was looking.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-01-24 08:53 PM

Oh you are a master of sensual innuendo.

Great creative stimulation for the reader, that's quite the collection of metaphors and some hyperboles thrown in for good measure.....

Try not to toss and turn too much in the night......(smile)

Eric

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-01-24 08:53 PM

Aren't you the cunning linguist!!!

Where is there a fan when I need one?!? lol

Oh, all I have to do is step outside into the falling snow to cool off!

Linda

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2009-01-24 09:02 PM

Thanks for the lookout Steven.

Yes, I may fondle the border again and now,
but I try, very, very, hard, not to come over.

Thanks Friend

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2009-01-24 09:06 PM

Thanks Eric, yeah what's a few hyperboles between friends yes.

Sorry buddy, but twists, and turns, are already scheduled for this evening... !

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2009-01-24 09:09 PM

My dear LindaWooHoo, don't be falling in that snow and causing a big flood now okay.

You are too cute dear one!
Richy

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2009-01-24 10:29 PM

Oooh myyyy...
I think I have the vapors.
And the nape of my neck is damp.

Well done!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2009-01-24 10:45 PM

Dear Nancy how have you been, it's been so long!

So nice to hear from you, I have missed your writing, I hope you're having a wonderful New Year.

I'm glad you liked the poem, vapors and all.

Richy

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2009-01-25 12:02 PM

Richy - a great write from the pen of an artist of romance...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2009-01-25 09:05 AM

Almost but not quite a toke over the line into the mature, but simply sizzling in here, where you had to hold just a bit back
in the build up of the frenzy.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

11 posted 2009-01-25 09:14 AM

In my mind this was the horizontal tango

Hope

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2009-01-25 09:47 AM

As always thank you BC!

I can't imagine life here at PIP
Before Charles.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

13 posted 2009-01-25 09:52 AM

Yes Michele dear, I'm not just trying to sell the steak, I'm trying to sell the sizzle. I guess if I ever want to be, mature though, I'll just have to take a bigger toke... cough! (hey good stuff!).

Richy

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

14 posted 2009-01-25 10:01 AM

I like the way your mind works Hope (whew!).

That sounds like a, fun, dance.

Do you give lessons?!

Richy

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

15 posted 2009-01-25 02:01 PM

Alright - after the "cooling" one can say, "What a tremendous write". Very well done! Love it!

Helen

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

16 posted 2009-01-26 12:57 PM

Dear Richy...... another masterpiece from you ... I did so enjoy your beautiful words...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

17 posted 2009-01-26 08:21 AM

Hi Honeybunch, always so nice to hear from you, I hope all is well with you and yours!

Thanks so much for the kind reply!
Richy

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

18 posted 2009-01-26 08:24 AM

Hi Roniece, I so appreciate your continuing support, it means alot to me! Thanks for the reply!

Richy

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

19 posted 2009-01-26 11:12 AM

A Romantic pen Indeed!
~ Beautifully Written

ARCTIC WIND

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