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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Sun was fooling around, Its light was for starving dogs, Moon was barking at my heart, Time was freezing itself in desperate lakes, Winter was insulting trees, cities were hostile, people thinking they were superior to amino acids, thoughts mugging imagination. Sun was fooling around , people were fooling around with me too and it was most crual, bleeding heart only listened by mirrors, I came back from China, I came back from California, I came back from Brazil, I came back from countries, leaving myself behind everywhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is fascinating, Yann! I love the idea of leaving yourself behind everywhere. Owl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
The amino acids left my stomach gurgling a bit, but, then, again, the leaving pieces of yourself here and there, at the same time, gave me a strange hunger for more. -Bob |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, It's good you spread yourself around. I tended to do that in my traveling days. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - I've left pieces of me behind in places I enjoyed, perhaps to go back some day and become whole again... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"bleeding heart only listened by mirrors" ...cool line...nice write...ponderable |
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