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Open Poetry #44

Let Me..

charlesmdodson
New Member

since 2009-01-16

Posts 8
CA, USA

0 posted 2009-01-16 10:01 PM

Well let me be
the first to remind you
While im hurting in places
i never knew
Im also sleeping
under the same roof
With no ghosts
And no sadness
And no turmoil
With the biggest eyes
That you and I
Have ever seen
The warmest face
the sweetest skin…
So while you
Are on the run
With nothing
And no one
And you’re smiling
with the fake
And the frauds
And all that applauds
Just know..
The song of the swan
Is everyone’s gone
And all that is left
Is me and he
And you are free
To be…
But let me be
The first to remind you…

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-01-17 05:20 AM

Interesting poem
Good flow reads quite easy,
Thank you for sharing..
Annie..

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