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Open Poetry #44

Wakening

WindWalker11
Junior Member

since 2008-12-24

Posts 41

0 posted 2009-01-16 09:22 PM

There is a Dawn
to awaken a Day
and set the soul free
to venture forth
alone
experiencing life
in ways thought
impossible.

There is a Sunset,
a separation
for greater coming together:
Spirit and Flesh
Awaken within a Sleep
...and
a new journey
ensues.

There is a non-place
between
the me you see
and the shadow you see:
the inter-dimensional
“I”
‘god’
of a new millennium.

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

1 posted 2009-01-17 01:24 AM

A non-place...Great writing with witty phrasing.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-01-17 01:42 AM

I know of the non-place. I call it the place between lives.
Ida

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-01-17 11:44 PM

"the inter-dimensional
“I”
'god'"

WW Eleven
Awakens to a New Millennium

~ yet again!

Love & Spirit Light,
EA

~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2009-01-19 05:29 PM

WOW! I really like this, WW.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-01-19 05:41 PM

Yo WindWalker11,

I'm afraid this poem is beyond my limited intellect.

I'm sure it's very good because you wrote it.

Bobby

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2009-01-20 02:30 PM

WW - There is indeed a non-place but I sometimes wonder why so few are aware of it. Enjoyed as always.

Helen

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2009-01-22 11:48 AM

Enjoyed this Deeply!

ARCTIC WIND

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