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None-In-Three |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
I press the button and renew The page with someone's masterpiece. I see a so-called review Of letters less than letters missed. The comment's author claims to be A bard, a critic and a muse. This three-in-one, or none-in-three Can't get the core of someone's views, Of thoughts in their poetic flight. Yes, it is hard - they tend to flee, But it's the artist's one true might To see what other eyes can't see, And poets for a day or two, Who shape a random phrase by chance, Who haven't proved a sentence true, Just have no right to set demands For those who ponder, dare and speak, Who search, discover and create. Their fame is yet to reach its peak, And as for you, it's way too late. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I used to bang out a poem a day, so know your sentiments on this well. I find when you write for yourself it takes much longer, and the poem eventually is worth the wait. Well done. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It all makes sense now Writing from the heart is where my muse lives, even though she'd rather nap all day, I'm always happy when she stirs me. Neat poem. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
i like your writings, disaster... ~I am the keeper of what he cast off~ |
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HAZARD Junior Member
since 2009-06-24
Posts 40ENGLAND |
Haunting and worth several reads - nice lyricism - and poignant - Liked this. HAZARD |
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