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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
Rustic Long the days burning... summer licks the skin golden, hungers for that wet kiss of sea that haunts in refrain, it sings to the shore, of white horses that rush the altar in worship sunflower moments, melt slowly... we catch the drops of ice-cream that fall vanilla sultry to our bare parchment, chase the setting sun, her fire falls...to meet our own we walk in autumn poetry; a lattice of flesh and thought spilling... the pulsing wind runs like fingers through hair to tease...touch... spiral henna like we are the quickening; our voices cinnamon & cloves to the dusking hours, we taste the crisp scent of nature's garment in the biting air our words drift as leaves... rustic in their language, sanguine in their swirling, they burn with eloquence and fall at our feet |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip, dear Sasha! I love your first entry very much, especially ... quote: Very nice! Love, Margherita  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wonderful write, Sasha! Yes indeed it is! So I went looking for a post from you after your comment on my "Dust from stone" post. In case you don't read my reply there, are you the Sasha who has posted at Terry's site? I used to post there under the name of Guinevere. Welcome to Pip. I look forward to reading more of your poetry here. Helen |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Welcome to Pip! Yes, I ditto the comments above, this is beautiful writing. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
we walk in autumn poetry; a lattice of flesh and thought spilling... the pulsing wind runs like fingers through hair to tease...touch... spiral henna like ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beautiful poem, love your style, fabulous entrance to the blue pages. Some kind of wonderful!!!! Truly! |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ thank you so much, Margherita I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem, my friend it's a privilege to be in such fine company *hugs* Sasha xx |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ hiya Helen, I do remember you as Gunievere it's so good to see and read you again, dear one thank you so much for taking a moment to read this poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it *hugs* Sash xx |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ Hiya Kaoru thank you for stopping in on this piece, my friend your lovely comment is much appreciated *hugs* Sasha xx P.S. is "Kaoru" Maori? |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ thank you so much for the warm welcome, Blues I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this piece I'm really loving the poetry I've been reading here you all shine! *hugs* Sasha xx |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A love envisioning of your surroundings, whether they be inner or outer thoughts of a day, a time, a moment. Well done, Angel. Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Welcome to Pip! This is a beautiful poem. |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ thank you sooo much, for the card, Sunshine such a wonderfully warm welcome I am stoked that you enjoyed this piece, my friend thank you for smiling my day *hugs* Sasha xx |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ thank you Oklahoma Rose nice to meet you, my friend I'm touched by your comment, and glad you enjoyed this poem see you out there *hugs* Sasha xx |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Pure bliss in enchanting words. I did adore this beautiful poem. ~ Heart2Heart ~ |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ heart2heart, thank you, my friend I'm happy you like this piece thanks so much for stopping by *hugs* Sasha xx |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Welcome to Pip! "Not everyone can be heros. Someone has to sit on the curb and clap as they pass by." Will Rogers |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
And of course you are lovely! (((( Sash ))))) welcome! H |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Welcome indeed, a pleasure to read. and thank you for dropping by and leaving your velveting touch! Craig |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Shadow Angel - thoroughly enjoyed your writing. Waiting to read more of them... Very nicely written.... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sasha, Welcome to PiP. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. I truly enjoyed the poetic cycle of the seasons that you have shared with us. Each is beautiful and you did well in framing them with your words. Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A veritable feast for the senses!!!  Greetings, Shadow Angel, and welcome to this family of kindred spirits! I thoroughly enjoyed your debuting poem! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very much enjoyed this wonderful piece, my friend...look forward to more from you... jimmy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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HAZARD Junior Member
since 2009-06-24
Posts 40ENGLAND |
Hello - I'm New to your forums. With a lot to learn! This poem crept quietly inside me - caught me a little off guard. I read it over again. It has an lovely ethereal quality. Much liked. ta ra HAZARD |
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