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Joe Houck
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0 posted 2009-06-05 07:38 PM




At seven he was good

hair parted on the side good
please and thank you good
went to church good
never swore good
respected elders good  
ate vegetables good
loved mom and dad good
never jerked off good

twenty years later,
four out of eight ain't bad
  

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-06-05 07:43 PM


Yo Joe,

True.

Bobby

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-06-05 11:12 PM


Oh good for you, this was lots of fun.
Dare I ask, which four would that be?  

Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
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california
3 posted 2009-06-06 05:19 PM


Bobby - Thanks for reading.


Blues - oh no, that's for the reader to ponder. haha. ok, i'll give you one. I still eat my vegetables. =)

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