Open Poetry #44 |
Paint me a Picture |
WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Paint me a Picture Paint me a picture of how it could be, Me in your arms, you loving me, Paint me a picture of sweet smelling bliss, A soft gentle touch, your warm tender kiss, Paint me a picture with stars in your eyes, With sunshine and rainbows filling the skies, Paint me a picture, with your finest brush, Softly and simple like the sound of a hush, Paint me a picture; use the colors of love, And send it to me, on the wings of a dove. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. [This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (06-04-2009 09:04 PM).] |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
An ideal capture for anyone's heart, Bloodline |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Bloodline, Thanks for your wonderful comments. Tracey |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Tracey that is a beautiful love poem, a delight to read. very well written. Take care. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Tracey, This is a lovely picture and poem combination. Bobby |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely... so I regift an old poem to you. /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=58&topic=002601 Enjoyed! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Lindsay, Bobby, Thank you both so much for reading and enjoying my poem. It means so much to me that you take the time to leave a comment on my work. Thanks, Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Sunshine, Thanks for your very kind comments, and your poem? absolutely beautiful. You truely are a tallented poet. Thanks for sharing it with me. Love Tracey. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very lovely idea, beautifully expressed, dear Tracey. A joy to read! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
The best picture I paint is with the colors of love. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
*sighs* so very dreamy indeed... what a picture you have painted! =) |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Margherita, Sue, Verve, Thank you so much for your taking the time to read my poems, I do appreciate your comments. Tracey. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh so romantic, I loved this one, you have truly penned a beautiful poem :-) Heart2Heart |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
H2H, Thank you so much for your reading and enjoying my poems. I often see a picture and write a poem about it, this time I wrote the poem, then went looking for a picture to go with it. I like the one I found. The shell is two lovers in each others arms. How perfect was that? Love always, Tracey. |
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