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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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your eyes gave me your answer early then like there were boards off the wall of you and something chilly was being a breeze making your woman places want my arms just part time, and friendly you suggested but you had longer moments in your glances like it was something permanent like paint and you wanted more then just one coating you left the windows open on your soft sighed and acted like proper didn't really suit you but you were afraid to know my hard reality or how my hands would fit around your fragile storms are always more lovely when left indoors when lovers can take the time to savor them wearing their residue like wallpaper over nothing then pressing together to remove their wrinkles before night comes to bend them over stone again _______________ daark |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"but you were afraid to know my hard reality or how my hands would fit around your fragile" And sometimes hard reality fits like strength much needed by weakness. Enjoyed. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I am not sure that anyone writes of longing the way you do. You so understand the two sides of many women (and men too?) - the "proper" that you often refer to - and the grittier side. You realize, understand, and (I think) love that dichotomy. Thank you again for touching my senses. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K...the safe place of hard hands sometimes is the sooth needed by fragile, thanks lady ____________ ms ali-san, I am trying to stay in tune with the pair of ducks you speak of yes...thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Is this where I stoop to the "You quack me up!" line - or should I mutter, "Duck" instead and think of invitations? A |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
there in dark waters scraping against the rocks of the cove of her heart. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi..I would call you sometime but that is not really your name is it thanks babe |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
You know what you do DarkDevil. Amazing. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP..moi?  thank you for looking in on this ms.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks van |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
storms are always more lovely when left indoors when lovers can take the time to savor them wearing their residue like wallpaper over nothing then pressing together to remove their wrinkles The title caught my attention... and I'm so glad it did. *S* Soft, sensual, gritty, gripping... your pen writes a rollercoaster I can't wait to ride again. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks babe!! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
brilliant! ~I am the keeper of what he cast off~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks lady |
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