Open Poetry #44 |
My favorite pastime |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I really think my favorite thing Is having time to spare To find that I have peace of mind And time with self to share I think it might be thoughts of free The dream of endless love To watch a face that shares a smile To think at times of God above It might just be to think of things Without the rush of living To find a day to pass away With hours so forgiving It’s the looking round and finding That life has been quite kind To relies that you live so free And dreams are there to find To sit back and to contemplate Then find some words to share To write a poem that some may like To find there’s love out there To wake when day does show her grace And not leave home when dark To go to bed and feel content And somehow leave my mark My favorite thing, it seems to be To find that I have space To do some things I like to do Before I’ve run my race |
||
© Copyright 2009 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved | |||
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I would love my favorite pastime to be able to simply share MORE time! ... then I wonder when my last pitstop was and if I might be low on water! I enjoyed both the calm and the pace of this, thanks! Ct |
||
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I wish I had more space and more time as well, and more ability to enjoy myself... Makes me tired. Enjoyed your poem. |
||
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm so glad you make time to share your poetry here. It's all good and always a treat to read you. |
||
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah I see you are working on your RVW time lovely Rick great poem ! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, have spend a few short moments in my space over the last few days, nice to put some words to paper, good to have you visit my friend and lovely to see your reply. Rick |
||
LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My favorite thing, it seems to be To find that I have space To do some things I like to do Before I’ve run my race Hi Rick, great poem old cobber, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I just hope that one of the things you like to do is cutting my hedge, anyway that will do for a start. Have a great day and may the sun shine upon you every day, between showers, that is. Lindsay |
||
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Lindsay, nice to get your reply mate, will try to get to your place soon ok, lots on at the moment and not enough hours in the days, but you know all that. Have a great weekend ahead Lindsay. Rick |
||
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words say it just as it is...I feel the same way, especially lately. Beautifully expressed. M |
||
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hello M, was nice to wake and find you here this morning, thanks for your comment my friend, have a great day. Rick |
||
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, Rick. Ida |
||
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Rick, I like that you like all these things because then you share in beautiful poetry that I never fail to read. Happy am I that I came back for this one. A |
||
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Ida, thanks for the visit my friend, good to see you here. Dear Alison, good to see you here, glad you scrolled down the page to find it my friend, thanks for the reply, enjoyed. Take care my friends, catch up soon again. Rick |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |