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Open Poetry #44

some days are just...

Shadow Angel
Junior Member

since 2009-05-31

Posts 29
New Zealand

0 posted 2009-06-01 07:52 AM

some days are just...

It is a blue tide
that crashes my blue day
I pause to watch
with blue eyes
the whispering waters
the gossiping stones
and the river that sings
with eyes closed
holding nothing
but the ocean

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2009-06-01 07:58 AM

lovely view of your day ms

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-06-01 12:43 PM

I do love your blue day, dear Sasha! Beautifully expressed!

Love,
Margherita

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

3 posted 2009-06-01 02:15 PM

loved "gossiping stones"

Adore you here,
H

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2009-06-01 03:59 PM

"Just"

It's probably one of my favorite words because it can imply so much.

Enjoyed your words, and I look forward to more.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2009-06-01 09:29 PM

Ooooooooooo yea!!

Love the sound of this, with my eyes closed!

Very pretty~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2009-06-02 02:24 PM

just ..... imagine, and feel
           see and sea
           live the view

           justly

      Craig

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2009-06-10 01:01 AM

You write beautiful poetry in blue.

A

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