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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-06-01 08:28 AM


you were sighway silk in high heels
hand on hip with some jaunty on
and a 'tude to glance here and there
between the metals that went over to maricopa

my boots were black as bad guys & hatless
you said there were things about my eyes
that made you feel you should be in trouble
then you laughed with your mother's laugh

you said you missed her more in the summer
and why hadn't I ever asked you to ride along
when I was going too fast to stay alive
up over the other ending of thirty three

you said you had heard stories about the dogs
that were made out of stone men's memories
but had never really seen them when sober
and did I want to keep them all as my demons

or were there enough of them to get to know you


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daark (highway sounds)



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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2009-06-01 11:14 AM


D,

It's a unique experience to listen to these sounds through your ears.  The song tells a story all on its own - and the tune is haunting with its innuendo.

Thank you for sharing -

A

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-06-01 11:28 AM


ms ali-san..was just watching "Real Housewives of Soggy Falls Va" and it came to me..thanks babe
fmlbarebackrider2001
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3 posted 2009-06-01 11:30 AM


Like this one like I do all your other works.

"Not everyone can be heros. Someone has to sit on the curb and clap as they pass by." Will Rogers

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-06-01 11:37 AM


thanks ms...am blessed by your read
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-06-01 01:23 PM


quote:
you said you missed her more in the summer
and why hadn't I ever asked you to ride along
when I was going too fast to stay alive
up over the other ending of thirty three



Good that at least your Angel always travelled along!

Being the sister of another biker freak I understand this and as always I am impressed by your outstanding talent.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2009-06-01 11:08 PM


and there you go....

vroom....vroom....

vroom....


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-06-02 07:17 AM


ms mar, thanks lady


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ms sun, you are so cute when you make that noise and wiggle your hands that way, thanks babe

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