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Open Poetry #44

Eternally

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2009-05-29 11:48 AM

I shall go on...
For there is in me
That which is part
Of the eternal you;
Even as in you
There is of me
A quiet,deathless ember.
Thus so shall we together
Span beyonds,and know,
Though lost,one to the other,
Still where one shall be,
So shall the other go.

Osprey
Member

since 2009-04-12

Posts 249

1 posted 2009-05-29 11:52 AM

Now, there's a vow if ever I heard one. A top-notch declaration of love and commitment, beyond the earthly.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2009-05-29 11:54 AM

"A quiet,deathless ember.
Thus so shall we together"

You write beautifully, enjoyed this very much.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-05-29 12:16 PM

quote:
For there is in me
That which is part
Of the eternal you;

just so ... this is enticing, who wouldn't sigh after reading such beautiful thoughts!

Love,
Margherita

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

4 posted 2009-05-29 01:02 PM

Osprey...

Thank you for your kind words, they are appreciated. True love never dies.

Regards.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

5 posted 2009-05-29 01:04 PM

Kaoru...

Thank you and glad you enjoyed.

Regards.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

6 posted 2009-05-29 01:05 PM

Margheita....

Thank you, your comments are always appreciated.

Regards.

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