Open Poetry #44 |
man kind of kind |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I saw lonely as diamonds in your eyes and thought it was something curable with slow hands and the man kind of kind and you saw it too in mine like it had just arrived a moment ago we laughed sometimes back then at the edge of that maybe street where we talked about crossing the line and getting each other all over us if for only momentary fulfillment I guess that is what we had in common that comfort of mutual discomfort and you didn't want to be lonely at fifty nor did I at sixty you imagined but you would keep yours a little longer because it was easier then arguing with the cold man that you danced with and I would keep mine too you predicted since you didn't see me giving up freedom to be just a prisoner of contentment but you didn't know I could just ride faster _________________ daark |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Seductive brilliance, amigo. I'm keeping this to warm up the chilly nights. |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
I'll tell ya something, Dark. If I'd come across your poetry 20 years ago, it would definitely have been used to unscrupulous ends. I'm not talking plagiarism, just ammunition.(winks) [This message has been edited by Osprey (05-29-2009 11:44 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite...thanks lady!! ______________ oz..thanks my friend, and..one can never have too much ammo. |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A vista of images in every word, Bloodline |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This poem is an EVENT. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bloodline. Thank you much friend _____________ Ms mar thank you sweet lady |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
prisoner of love a paradox of yearning for more or for less. You are an uncommon man, D. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Indi Would you have me any other way? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You make me weak in the knees, and then make me look. This is special, like Margherita said, it's an event, and what do you know.. I still got my number. Hmmm, yea!!! |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
I would kill to have your mind. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bluezy. You are a love song babe, thank you ____________ SFA, I did lose it so you might find it floating somewhere. Lol. Thanks so much _________ Thanks Van |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
You really are something, D. Outstanding. L, H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
UBP...thanks so much lady, |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sometimes I read your poetry and can only think of replies that sound awkward or too gushing. The fact is when I strip all the superlatives away - I am left with this need to read more and to read poems of yours I have read before. This is really what it is all about for me - I read you with my first cup of coffee. I read you when I am rushing out the door. I read you in between my day and I read you before sleep. It doesn't matter when I read my Dark Stranger poem - it only matters that I get my fix. Thank you for addicting me. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I feel like Alison, although I don't always reply... but this one D, is truly you from before, during and after and I especially love this since I am coming upon that 60 very soon "I guess that is what we had in common that comfort of mutual discomfort and you didn't want to be lonely at fifty nor did I at sixty you imagined but you would keep yours a little longer because it was easier then arguing with the cold man that you danced with and I would keep mine too you predicted since you didn't see me giving up freedom to be just a prisoner of contentment" Here's to you always "riding faster" with very kind thoughts, M (btw, I think I missed wishing you a happy one) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..and they say addicts are sexy!! thanks babe I am humbled by your comments. _______________ ms MMs thanks for the read and recognition...and the wish. I know your sexty will be fine!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
When I read this the first time - what a week ago now? - I felt as mesmerized and speechless as I do now. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..speechless is so cute on you..thanks little one |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Another of your happy addicts checking in. *S* Even the Keys didn't keep me from missing your words. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..my favorite candy is addict flavored and served at body temperture....thanks lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh, man of art and heart, you made me come back to read this again and it won't be the last time. It's just outstanding work. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I see that in 2009 I said it won't be the last time ... and here I am, so happy to have come to the archives for a while. It is still an event! Goodness gracious, you can't deprive us Pipsters of your work! So please serve us some of your unique and spicy poetic appetizers! Will you ... Margherita |
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