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Old faithful
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Old faithful |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Old Faithful, we were lucky enough after a long day trip to meet you just in time, as a love rendez vous, you surprised children giant dazing fairy geyser, keeping everyone busy and wide opened eyes until you realized so many people were looking at you, imagine you have been intimidated young girl, and got back in your fault hugging Faithful family. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW, I never have visited Old Faithful yet, though I was once only 50 miles from her. So, apparently she can be coy. A fine write, Yann. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The sping of life is most certainly in the deep well of family. Loving your thoughts here, islander~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think you did a fine job on this one, yann. Ida |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A wonderful poem, yann. |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A poem to enjoy with wonder and emotion, Bloodline |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Makes me wanna see it myself! Enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 Dear Yann, I think this is the most original way to render a geyser's character. Simply awesome. Love, Margherita  |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
What a great thought, to think of Old Faithful as being shy before the star-struck onlookers, and slipping coyly back beneath. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - ole faithful spurting every so often. Never seen her go off, but I'm sure it's splendid... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Oh Kacy you were so close, how could have you missed it ? May be you will return but take care of time for not waiting 90 minutes ... have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks blue serenade for the sweet pertinent comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Ida forf taking time to read. have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thnks O rose, you are so kind. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Yes Bloodline as old faithful...thanks for the kind comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks kaoru, I bet you could and have a nice trip and sweet wonders. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Oh Margherita you are so sweet, the picture you picked is perfect and joyful... have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Osprey for the accurate comment and time reading the poem. have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bill, thanks for passing, old faithful spurts every 90 minutes then get oof in its fault, this is a must have seen show but you have to take care of time for not waiting 89 minutes... have a nice day yann |
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