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Lone_Wolf84
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since 2009-05-26
Posts 21


0 posted 2009-05-27 05:03 PM


My second try, came out so so. I hope it helps in dark times.

Trying to stay positive while the whole world sees red
Trying to reach the corpses of the dead
preventing them to be reborn
But seeds are still being sown
You see all the colors are all helping
We want a positive change and that's when we all will sing.
In a united voice we will all cry
eyes will never dry.
but not of sadness, not for grief.
But for joy and happiness
never again for stillness
There will be people stealing your feelings but don't say thief
instead lift your arm and say share it
Not a little bit
But make it realistic
but for the truth that the world is majestic
and it never leaves anybody behind.
don't rewind
Never never, we see only local
and don't call
Becouse when u are trying to see the light
it will appear when the time is right.
but the world is so much bigger.
And all togheter we all become tigers.
unity is where the change and where the happiness will come.

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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
1 posted 2009-05-27 05:10 PM


Share it.


Nice work.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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