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WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2009-01-13 04:41 PM

Bundle of Thoughts

Words and wisdom, space and time,
Dreams of the poet, versed in rhyme,

Visions of love, lost or found,
Hopes of the heart, freely bound,

I read with joy, the phrases written,
And smile inside, with a memory smitten,

Each line or stanza, carefully placed,
Yet how many came first, then erased,

But in the end, a work to behold,
To be enjoyed, by young and old,

It’s sort of,

Sort of like a little bundle of thoughts,
Went skipping through our minds,

We grab a handful, pull them out,
And write them for all to find.

I hope you find my little bundles, Enjoyable. WT.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

[This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (01-15-2009 12:34 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-01-13 05:43 PM

Indeed I did enjoy your little bundle of thoughts, dear Poet! In fact, I am saving them ~ if you do not mind, to a folder of poetic thoughts about poets and their writing of poetry!

Well done! Love it!

P.S. Nice to see your handsome smiling face!

EA

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-01-13 07:57 PM

I enjoy your writing very much, Tracey. Always look for your name.
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-01-13 08:01 PM

WT,

You have some good lines, and good ideas here in this well written poem.

Now loosen your tie, you'll be more comfortable.

(I know you won't, and I understand.)

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-01-14 05:37 AM

Yes, you caught the Poet's art well in this one, dear Tracey. Nice to meet your smile.

I did enjoy your bundle of thoughts.

Love,
Margherita

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

5 posted 2009-01-14 10:03 AM

Linda,  I feel honored to be included in your book of poets,  Thank you!!

Ida, How nice of you to look for my work, That means the world to me.

Bobby, Thank you for the kind words, Oh, and the tie?  Picture was at my sons wedding. It came off shortly there after.

Margherita, so nice to see you seeing me,

Hope you all have a wonderful New Year, and may you grab beautiful handfuls of thoughts this year.

Love, W.Tracey

Alison