Open Poetry #44 |
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I'm going to a wedding !! |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
Tomorrow I will go to Gaze at the Gaza.I have a new dishdasher.Colourful. Cross-stitched Palestinian style. I will wear my hair uncovered.Hope it is not too scarlett. I will dance at a wedding looking over my shoulder. Gifts fill my suitcase. No room for my heels. McDonalds have sent me soft toys for the children. A variety of animals. Various kinds.Australian. Ex 'Happy Meals' Individually wrapped in plastic and labelled for Children Endangered Species Take care. Tomorrow I will dance at a wedding, whirling round and around. Children. Endangered species. Take care. Tomorrow I will dance.Around and around. Inshallah. Oh,God. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I really loved this, Boshii. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Boshii2 - nice write, enjoyed this one... BC |
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mein or meree thanhai Junior Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 21 |
you got a lucky chance. to love one there, where i wish to make all the best, go and comback safely i'll pray for you |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
I liked this poem as far as I understood it. I am not very enlightened about other cultures, I guess. What does inshallah mean? Does the color scarlet have particular signifigance to the culture? Other than my own pitiful lack of understanding, the poem was beautifully worded and quite intriguing. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
Dear Tao ( I loved your poem ) and found all your replies that I have read so gentle and encouraging and wise. Thank you. Inshallah means "God willing" .I am worried about my scarlett hair because most hair there will either be bruinette or covered. I am going to my friend's wedding and then the new bride will come to Australia to begin a new adventure.She and he will live in my house and we will and we will share lifestyles ,religions and cultures. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Boshii2, that's an interesting piece, shaking this reader out of his comfort zone and presenting something new. A refreshing writ; I'm glad I stopped by. Mark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Both the poem, and the reason behind it, are endearing. I wish you all well...and that your cultures will stimulate one another meaningfully. ![]() |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Boshii2, Have fun at the wedding Hon. That's what weddings are for. Love Bobby |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Boshii Interesting concerns within the folds of a wedding dress. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
dance and have a great time ![]() |
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