Open Poetry #44 |
New Moon |
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
On this journey Too long awaited, Too late executed I seek your smile With intense listen. Will this wind Or gentle waves Whisper your voice? Heaven surely shines With increased brightness But on these dark shores Tears drip into the sea. missing Marge |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Well done sentiment of loss. I can relate. Regards. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem is full of love and gentle memories. This is a real beauty, suthern gal~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, Suthern One, if we really listen, we can hear Willow White Feather's gentle voice carried on the winds and the rolling waves of the sea. A lovely reminder of our soul sister. Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful and poignant, dear Ruth. I do believe Marge remains connected to us through these blue pages too. Her energy of love is felt. You conveyed intensely what so many of us feel. Thank you! Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely, Ruth. I miss Marge too. She was the first to welcome me to PIP. Ida |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
As soon as I read the title, I thought of Marge. I should have known this would be for her. Beautiful job.((hugs)) suthern....I'm missing her too. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
A lovely lady, also the first to welcome me to PIP. She did touch all who knew her with such an enveloping warmth. ...she must know the lovely touch of your own tender heart. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ruth, I have been thinking of Marge too and missing her flowers. You write of your longing beautifully. Know what? Our tears are what makes the oceans so magical. I bet Marge is turing your tears to those sparkling diamonds that we see dancing on the water. You know she will make them beautiful. Love, Alison |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ditto! Thanx Suthern... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Awwww Southern, I miss Marge too. There's not a day that goes by, when I don't think about her. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
We all miss Marge Ruth, Thank you for this poem! ~ In remembrance of Marge ~ Prayer huggies ARCTIC WIND |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you so much, my friends... I appreciate your responses so very much. *S* I started planning this vacation last year and,, a visit with Marge was the first "must do" I penciled in. When I saw an exit for DeLand, it took a lot of deep breaths to keep tears at bay... when the beaches were void of even her full moon, the missing got the best of me. Thank you for receiving my grieving so kindly. |
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