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Open Poetry #44

Reprise

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2009-05-23 02:04 PM

I heard her go down the winding stair;
Then her footsteps on the floor----
And I knew she had gone forever
By the closing of a door.

Perhaps someday,should she come back,
Ascend the winding stair
And open wide my dusty door----
She'll find me waiting there!

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-05-23 02:20 PM

Keep waiting Rex, my friend. One day she may well return.

Your style is amazingly compact and succinct, without losing any meaning.

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

2 posted 2009-05-23 02:28 PM

It's like a song
returning on the loop
of time, so good to hear,

Bloodline

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

3 posted 2009-05-23 03:04 PM

Suncleaver...

Thanks, but waiting longer is not in the cards. Thanks again for reading.

Regards.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

4 posted 2009-05-23 03:06 PM

Bloodline....

Thank you for your kind comments, they are appreciated.

Regards.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2009-05-23 08:48 PM

Beautiful as always.
Ida

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2009-05-23 10:05 PM

rex
you are becoming
another of my favs

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

7 posted 2009-05-24 11:22 AM

Marchmadness....

Thank you Ida, you are very kind.

Regards.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

8 posted 2009-05-24 11:24 AM

1slick_lady....

Thanks, I appreciate it and hope to live up to your expectations.

Regards.

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