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Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-01-13 05:03 AM

Don't You

Your sad I can see that, can I help Cheer you up?
tell me what it is that's making you cry inside?
I see a person lost and alone
wanting to be loved and hugged to sleep
in the warmth of the arms of love,

Don't walk away and dismiss me
put your fears and tensions away
I see a beautiful person in front of me
don't be so quick or so lonely
But let me help you to find the love you lost
please wont you stay?

Your steely blue eyes tell a sad story
of loss and hurt you have suffered along the way
It's time to get off, of your life's highway
but please don't walk away from me,

I need you here to stay and face life again
don't you know that I have seen you on every streets corner
Don't you recognise the one that you walked away from
it's me mum! your very own Daughter,

Annie
05-10-2008

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-01-13 12:45 PM

Again a very sensitive and poignant way to reach out, dear Annie!

Love,
Margherita

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2009-01-13 04:19 PM

In this very touching write, I feel your loss, am I sensing a lost mind or lost soul?

Wonderful write, Take care, may your Mum find her way back to your loving heart.

WT.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

3 posted 2009-01-13 04:52 PM

Your right WT.A lost mind my mum doesn't recognise me,

Thank you both for your comments

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2009-01-15 03:45 AM

WOW! A very sad but touching write.

Eric

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

5 posted 2009-01-15 04:07 AM

My dear friend Thank you for your pretty words

My Regards

Nourzihane

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

6 posted 2009-01-15 04:45 AM

Thank you both

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2009-01-15 09:25 AM

So very touching and heartfelt

Hope

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

8 posted 2009-01-15 02:15 PM

Thank you Hope

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