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Water play |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Water play *** Velvety emerald waters bubble alluring temptations. Sun inspired words tremble upon wiggling wave-toes. I stand intrigued at the vain shoreline. Leisurely it offers its bare skin to the constant caressing of daring sea fingers, releasing silent sighs into the air. With half closed eyes I let my brain engage in deciphering the poem - a poem it is I know! – which dances its crazy dance, fragmented in puzzle pieces, upon the sparkling surface of the playful liquid vastness. Blindfolded by the sun, with the intermediation of my heart on high alert, I feel the wet words touch my thirsty lips. From there they swiftly slip into my consciousness. Then I just do as I am told, for my love knows no hesitation. My toes meet yours in the underwater world. We move like sinuous algae and disappear within each other. The elements gather in wild celebration of our desire. Never our merging had been so cool, for naturally ... the poem was about fire. *** |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
silent Alison - who just wants to savor the feeling |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so passionate and really, really lovely. Thank you for this deliciously romantic walk on the beach. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...you do romantica as an artist..lovely work |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You are the master of your craft! Very much enjoyed. |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Lovely...as well as devious. Enjoyed. Regards. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very much enjoyed your gifting here my friend, thank you for sharing today. Rick |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, You make me want to go to the shore, it's about fifty miles away. I make it there at least once a year. Love Bobby |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
What a beutiful picture you have painted. so warm, so close. loved it. Billie c. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - dang, this has to be the best poem of yours I've read. So different from what I've seen, and I like the style, and underneath romance it radiants. Great write... BC |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A melding of water and fire, makes for quite a sizzle, in any language, Bloodline |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dolphina the Water Nymph! You're quite the alluring temptress! ~ and I love this aspect of you as well as all your others! A nice balanceing of your yin and yang! lol  AT |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It seems your talent knows no bounds. Margherita. Ida |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all for telling me you enjoyed my Water play! Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Margherita, you are a very talented poet. Enjoyed this water play, very much. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear James and dear Sue, you are so kind! Love, Margherita |
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