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In My Shadows Deep
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In My Shadows Deep |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This has a nice picture. The words come across to me as somewhat stilted. I'd try for more smoothness. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your deep yearning is so well rendered, dear Bill, in this loving tribute. May you be "dragged" out of your deep shadows and enjoy the kisses you ache for. You found such a romantic picture too ... it fits well. Love, Margherita  |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Dear Bill Beutiful picture, lovely poem, nice to read something that rhymes, I love it, lucky is the lady that receives this. Billie C. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - thank you for the comment. I read this over and over and seems ok, could be just me though. Lot's of meaning in the words though, at least what I tryed to convey... Margherita - your words touch me deeply, and I thank you for them. I believe you did read into the meaning of this writing... Billie - thank you for your gracious thoughts about this write. It did take a while to put together and I appreciate what you said... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I love the idea of kneeling facing dreams, I am impressed by the beauty of the image and the serenity of both poem and picture...great work. yann |
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Rose of Sharon Junior Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 19 |
Bill In shadows sometime secrets hide only to be forgotten once love arrives. Love, Sharon |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Beautiful poetry but to me a little on the heart wrenching side. In the deep shadows, I do hope your dreams come true. Ariana |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bill, you feel deeply and you have the ability to convey that so poetically. Your poetry is simply sublime and your selection of graphics is always breath-taking and they complement your words, perfectly.   Linda |
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