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SoftSoul94
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since 2009-05-20
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0 posted 2009-05-20 12:06 PM


Hello everyone.

This is my very first poem, I hope you like it

I'm sorry to say,
That you're my first and my last.
I'm sorry to say,
That I can't forget the past.

I'm sorry to say,
That I loved what we had.
I'm sorry to say,
That now I'm feeling so sad.

I'm sorry to say,
That I know you're with someone new.
And I'm sorry to say,
That I'm still in love with you


© Copyright 2009 Nadia Vilby - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2009-05-20 12:07 PM


Pretty soon you will get past the sorry and go through the not sorry at all.

Well done, and welcome to pip!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2009-05-20 04:40 PM


Yes indeed, welcome to PiP!

Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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with you
3 posted 2009-05-20 04:46 PM


Welcome

enjoyed, very good rhythm  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2009-05-20 05:03 PM


Welcome to Pips.
Sorry to say, some of us remember saying something very similar.
Enjoy your time here!

WTBAKELAR
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5 posted 2009-05-20 06:14 PM


Well it's about time you got here!
Do you know how long we have been waiting for you?

I'm sorry to say we missed you all this time.
Glad you finally made it

Welcome to the Blue Addiction.

Tracey.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2009-05-20 06:16 PM


SoftSoul94 - nice write for your first post, expecting to see many more...

BC

Zuel Furion
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since 2009-06-06
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south africa
7 posted 2009-06-07 04:25 AM


so beautifull to see the rewards when fear is challenged.

love the work Princess. keep going.

kindredspirit
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8 posted 2009-06-07 07:30 PM


keep writing!
Verve
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since 1999-06-23
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9 posted 2009-06-08 07:30 AM




Nicely done. Simple and effective!!!

Welcome to PIP! =)

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 posted 2009-06-08 09:01 AM


Yo dear SoftSoul94,

This poem is well organized, and works well.

Love Bobby

LindsayP
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Australia, Victoria
11 posted 2009-06-09 01:29 AM



A warm welcome to PIP and I'm not sorry to say that you will enjoy it here. nice post.

Lindsay

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