Open Poetry #44 |
I'm Sorry To Say |
SoftSoul94 New Member
since 2009-05-20
Posts 5 |
Hello everyone. This is my very first poem, I hope you like it I'm sorry to say, That you're my first and my last. I'm sorry to say, That I can't forget the past. I'm sorry to say, That I loved what we had. I'm sorry to say, That now I'm feeling so sad. I'm sorry to say, That I know you're with someone new. And I'm sorry to say, That I'm still in love with you |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Pretty soon you will get past the sorry and go through the not sorry at all. Well done, and welcome to pip! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes indeed, welcome to PiP! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome enjoyed, very good rhythm |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Pips. Sorry to say, some of us remember saying something very similar. Enjoy your time here! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Well it's about time you got here! Do you know how long we have been waiting for you? I'm sorry to say we missed you all this time. Glad you finally made it Welcome to the Blue Addiction. Tracey. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SoftSoul94 - nice write for your first post, expecting to see many more... BC |
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Zuel Furion New Member
since 2009-06-06
Posts 1south africa |
so beautifull to see the rewards when fear is challenged. love the work Princess. keep going. |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
keep writing! |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Nicely done. Simple and effective!!! Welcome to PIP! =) |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SoftSoul94, This poem is well organized, and works well. Love Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A warm welcome to PIP and I'm not sorry to say that you will enjoy it here. nice post. Lindsay |
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