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WTBAKELAR

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since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2009-05-19 03:12 PM

I can't believe my eyes,
That’s a miniature mountain in front of me,
And I am supposed to put that bright orange ball,
In a hole behind it, that I can't even see,

Now what the heck is this?
A windmill that is spinning and spinning,
That’s a dang little space, that keeps hiding the path,
Where I keep trying to put, Heh, who's winning?

Oh look at that,
It’s a ramp with five holes, count them five,
And I don't even know which one is correct,
Will I ever get out of this alive,

What did you just say?
Are you out of your mind, there are still nine more to go?
I can't believe what's in front of me now,
It's a whale and it's shooting water out of its hole.

OK, I did it,
I made it through with out once saying "FORE"
Yeh, I'll admit, I had a great time,
What do you mean YOU were keeping score?

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

[This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (05-19-2009 04:20 PM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-05-19 03:43 PM

LOL
I don't have enough coordination for any sort of goofy golf, and the real deal, is never going to happen...no patience....lol

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-05-19 04:41 PM

Yo WTBAKELAR,

This is well done. I think I could still handle Miniature Golf.

Bobby

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

3 posted 2009-05-20 12:46 PM

Hi! Tracey

You'v got more Courage than I do . Would you beleive I have never tried minature golf?

Fun read

Love Mom

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-05-20 01:49 AM

I played this once with a large group of friends .. I was the very worst of the group and laughed so hard that I almost wet my pants. I have no hand-eye coordination. This is really fun, WTB.

A

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

5 posted 2009-05-20 09:28 AM

Thank you all for your fun and interesting comments.
I quite like playing a round of miniature for fun. Keeping score is out of the question, but competition is fair game.

This poem and my other Golf Hazards came from a poem challenge. I wrote 3 poems about golf in a half hour. (I did not post one of them)
Obviously, not much heavy thinking went into them, but, hey they were fun.

Thank you again for enjoying my poems.
Love, Tracey.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-05-22 11:08 AM

LOL... I enjoyed this very much... brought back memories of when a bunch of us would spend an afternoon playing putt-putt... and I could hit almost anything I wasn't aiming at? LOL Thanks for the grins! *S*

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-05-22 01:27 PM

This is cute and also for me it brought back memories, mostly romantic ones ... I loved and still love minigolf, but have no opportunity here anymore to show off ... yes I was good.

Very nice.

Love,
Margherita

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