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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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small talk in sinews that strain around some magical slice of time that has fallen from the jaws of day in your eyes there is a ocean and a sky and my arms are confused about being damp or about surrounding cloud that bruise you look the other way when you see me looking the other way from nonchalantly accidental as if it were something beside the road when we both stopped and hoped for more traffic so we had more time to wait for the green and now greener is where we are holding moments like they were each other's gloveless hands _____________ daark |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Stranger, I like the way you use your words. This is very fine writing. Bobby |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
emotions are hard to form into words or carve into something that you look upon and say this is it this is what I meant to show the world this is where my heart is. But still I get your feelings in this, nice write RedStone |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BobbyJ, thanks guy!! ________________ thank you Redstone..I appreciate the glance |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Loving this as well. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K...a pleasure to have your eyes here, thanks lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey D! I like the way you use words too. And, I like the ocean and deserted, natural (grins) beaches with waves. Yep, I do. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I find tenderness in these inspired words. A momentary confusion brought a magical poem. Love, Margherita |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"in your eyes there is a ocean and a sky" that is an incredible thing to say to someone |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend ___________ ms slick..thanks babe |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Penned excellently! ~ Enjoyed the write  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks AW |
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