Open Poetry #44 |
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Summer evening |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway ![]() |
Summer evening Hushed is the wind and evening is calm On a gentle night that's sure to bring Release of scented dew laced balm The owl and bat on silent wing I listen to their call again Across the meadows's moonlit trail As heavens caress the trees with rain To the sweet refrain of the nightingale Emerging from a sylvan shield The moon descends as if in flight Following me across the field As starlight tips each leaf with light Summer sighs in fragrant shade Where flowers butterflies entice And dappled, dusky boughs cascade In lush and perfumed paradise Hushed now the song and silent the cry Spent is the golden day's delight The meadows forget my steps and I Leave their still pathways to the night ….. [This message has been edited by Heart2Heart (05-19-2009 06:30 AM).] |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
PS: I tried to correct an error in the first sentence, but it's not possible for some reason. The first line should read: "Hushed is the wind AND evening is calm" Heart2Heart |
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collins613 Junior Member
since 2009-05-08
Posts 15NYC, NY |
Aahhhhhh. From the land of Burns. There's beauty in your words. |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Heart2Heart, This is absolutely beautiful. Well written, versed and metered. your poem creates a wonderful visual experience. So nice. Tracey. Oh, Welcome to the Blue addiction. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you kindly Collins. Yes indeed I hail from Ayrshire where Rabbie was born ! Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you so much for your sweet reply Tracey, appreciate your kind words very much. Heart2heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You come from a great land....One I long to visit...from the sounds of your poem, it is even more lovely than I imagined! Welcome to PIP! ~ARH |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Why thank you Romantic Heart, you're welcome to visit any time ! Heart2Heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Looks like your "change" took in your first line, Poet. Sometimes we have to refresh the pages in order to see the changes. ![]() Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Heart2Heart - Whenever the reader can see it, hear it, feel it and almost taste it, then the poet can testify to an impact of beauty as you have done here. Enjoyed muchly. Namyh |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Appreciate your kind comments, thank you Sunshine and Namyh. Heart2Heart |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Truly beautiful and done in a style to which I would like to become accustomed. Regards. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captivating! I was totally emersed in the beauty and serenity of that "Summer Evening". I like your sytle, Dear Poetess! ![]() Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel ![]() |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
wonderful writing, describing the home of my forefathers ... we vacationed in Ireland last year to see my wife's homeland but we'd like to visit Scotland on our next trip ![]() Rex |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Rex, thanks for lovely comment ! Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Earth Angel (what a lovely name) thanks ever so much for comment and warm welcomes. heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Rex Allen, thanks ! Scotland's just as nice mind you ! Heart2Heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enchanting verse throughout; could relate to the whispering breeze play ..."Emerging from a sylvan shield The moon descends as if in flight Following me across the field As starlight tips each leaf with light"... Found a favorite cupped within this artful setting. Nicely done. |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Your lovely poem reminds me of the nights when we were just young my older sister and I would lay out on the grass cuddled in a blanket and watch the stars and some times a bat would come by and we would squeel and hide our heads. Billie C. |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A view given with poetic grace, a vision nature grants to few, much like this morning when two large Pileated Woodpeckers sat on a pole just outside my door, couldn't get my camera before they flew away, Bloodline |
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