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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-05-18 10:57 PM


Bones didn’t pick
the life he’s led.  

He didn’t buy it
at the store.  

It was handed to him
by fate,
economics,
accident of birth,
the local,
and by just plain chance.  

So if you don’t like
what Bones does
to stay alive,
don’t blame him,
it’s not his fault,
it’s just the way it is.

Bobby

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1 posted 2009-05-19 01:33 AM


I don't buy it because I think we all have choices.  But, I think Bones is interesting - and no, I have not walked in his shoes.  And honestly?  I wouldn't want to.

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2 posted 2009-05-19 02:29 AM




Come on now Bobby, We deal the hand we are delt, But, some times it pays to have an ace up the sleeve. You can bet on it.


Billie C.

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2009-05-19 10:20 AM


Thanks dear Alison,

Life is a complex and interesting experience.  Everyone does the best they can.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-05-19 10:22 AM


Thanks dear Billie,

You are correct, and Bones knows that.  He's very good at cards, and used to earn his keep playing poker.  He never cheated though.

Love Bobby

Billie Cullimore
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5 posted 2009-05-20 01:13 AM


I don't think our Bobby would ever cheat. Bones is too nice a guy under all that talk.
                                                                                                                                                         Learning to love ya,

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6 posted 2009-05-20 11:09 AM


You have to say that Bobby, some people don't choose their life and are very brave, thanks for the moving poem.

yann

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-05-20 04:00 PM


Thanks dear Billie,

For your very kind vote of confidence--if I had been one to cheat at cards, I would have been eliminated years ago.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-05-20 04:03 PM


Thanks Yann,

For your very kind words on Bones, he appreciates it.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2009-05-20 05:57 PM


Bobby - perhaps this all happened to Bones, but he does have a choice, he can make things better, but only if he feels it inside...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-05-20 06:18 PM


Thanks Bill,

I'll let Bones know.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bobby

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