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SlowlyFallAway
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0 posted 2009-05-18 10:32 AM


Your broken chorus, with words sewn together by his rhythmic hands
Foraging through dirty needles, used to inject the melody of your own pain
While anger freestyles angst’s structure, tuning to the sound of default
You tap your fingers softly on the coffee stained table to the thrash of noise
Retrieving a cigarette half smoked already lighter to your lips and feel the heat
The sense of reverberation echoing through your mouth beneath your tongue it stings
Bouncing off the walls you’ve built within your mind since time tightened grips
All too long stranded in placed consignments handed to your superiors
Where your thought provisions are no longer sufficient enough for two


Emily Shives
5-18-09

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1 posted 2009-05-18 08:07 PM


I really like this... I do I do I doOOo.
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