Open Poetry #44 |
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A Little Poem |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! ![]() |
A Little Poem If I had a tuffit, I’d share it with you One bowl of curds and whey, Two spoons We’d talk of silly things Nothing things that don’t matter Under the shoodle-doodles of day We’d smiles our secrets Two friends Creating fairy tales, Singing nonsense songs out of tune We’d tuffit sit as moon drops whispered Subtle suggestions and joined Two lovers Believing that magic exists Weaving night dreams into webs - Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You surely make ME believe that magic exists, dear Alison. This is very lovely. Had me google searching for "tuffit" and I found it: A 'tuffit' is a small stoollike chair! (round seat top with 3 legs). Can imagine the acrobatics to share it with another, having also a bowl of curds and whey ... Thank you so much for the smiles! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ali-san tuffit is the sound bite sized shreaded wheat pillows make when you bit them with rubber teeth.. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
If you silly moderator folk wouldn't bleep it, I'd comment on how much I "effing" love your work, and you as a person. Ala-nevertoosoon, you're a cool cat. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I can honestly say that I have never wanted to sit on a tuffit as badly as I now want to share one with you. Do they come in different colors? Cute, whimsical write, Tracey. |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Well, magic does exist. I'd gladly share your tuffit, Miss Muffet. But, I'm on a diet: the curds and whey are all yours. Completely unexpected and charming. Thank you. [This message has been edited by Osprey (05-19-2009 04:39 AM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Alison, Okay Miss. Muffet, I’m game. I love cottage cheese. This is a cute poem. Love Bobby |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
LOVE IT! Simply, really. It's so fun. ![]() |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Little poems or big poems, they are all fantastic. You are a wonderful poet dear Alison! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a fun poem, Alison, Ida |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, You gotta put your right foot in and put your right foot out. Do the hokey-pokey and turn yourself about. That's what it's all about! Oh wait - I am doing my ADD thing again. It's a tight fit but, you know, tuffit sharing is all about snuggling. Thank you for reading and - know what? There is magic! Honest. Love, Alison - D, you gotta upgrade those teeth! Sheese - you think every odd noise is from those dang teeth you wear. C'mon man, a tuffit is what you would wear under your kilt (if you wore one). Everyone knows that! A - Hey VM, VAM, VOOM ! Thank you. Loving your poet'ree stuff too. A - Yep, Tracey, tuffits are like Life-Savers - they come in any color you can imagine. It's all about your imagination, you know. Thank you for sharing - Alison - Hey Osprey, Thanks for the C&W. May I hock your spoon since you don't need it? Seriously, thank you for reading and smiling. Alison - Bobby, Okay, okay, I'll share with you. Osprey gave us lots more. Take care and thank you for reading and enjoying with me. Alison - Karou, Yay! ![]() Thank you. Alison - Sue, You are always so nice to me. Thank you. xoxoox Alison - Ida, I bet you are a tuffit sitter too. Yep. You are. xoxoxo, A |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Both the poem and the responses are delightful... thanks for the smiles! *S* |
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