Eteternitys' Song (Sonnet)

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Open Poetry #44

Eteternitys' Song (Sonnet)

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-05-18 12:52 PM

The day my life began,
Was in the middle of July,
The day I made a plan,
To be with you till I die,
Being with you empowers me,
I can't control myself,
When I'm with you, you're all I see,
You mean more to me than wealth.
No matter what I could ever do,
Nothing could ever portray,
How deep my love goes for you,
No matter what I say,
And when I go there into the sky nothing here can stop me,
From being with you until I die then on to eternity.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2009-05-24 02:11 PM

Beautiful!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-05-24 03:32 PM

Yo dear Romantic Heat,

I think it’s “eternity”.

Lovely poem anyway.

Love Bobby

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

3 posted 2009-05-24 03:48 PM

Emotions carry
thought away
and embrace
each line,
words that kiss,

Bloodline

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

4 posted 2009-05-25 05:11 PM

I know this feeling well.

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