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passing shadows
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0 posted 2009-05-17 10:58 AM



I anticipate
the sprouting of sunflowers
maybe love is there.

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with you
1 posted 2009-05-17 11:15 AM


it's all around you, just waiting...


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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2009-05-17 11:23 AM


buried deep within
hope is a seed unfolding
thirsting for water

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Gaia
3 posted 2009-05-17 12:00 PM


No sunflowers planted here.
Perhaps, in two weeks.
Wishing you smiles.

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-05-17 01:05 PM


Yo dear Passing shadows,

This works well as a senryu.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-05-17 01:32 PM


You call beauty into being.

Very lovely, dear Dixie.

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2009-05-17 02:33 PM


Wow...!!!!

Love,
Eric

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7 posted 2009-05-18 11:14 AM


Lovely, Dixie.

A

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where the wild flowers grow
8 posted 2009-05-18 08:02 PM


A beautiful thought and anticipation indeed.
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9 posted 2009-05-18 08:47 PM


Perhaps it is. I certainly hope so; for all. If not, the goldfinches will definitely be there.
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10 posted 2009-05-19 01:11 PM


Lovely senyru! *S* We can always hope! *S*
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11 posted 2009-05-19 07:20 PM


sun-kissed heartbeat sigh
gold petal tug at blue sky
and passing shadows




passing shadows
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12 posted 2009-05-19 09:25 PM


wow what gorgeous replies here!!

thank you special people!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
13 posted 2009-05-20 05:55 PM


passing shadows - love can also be found in the roses, of a special kind...

BC

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14 posted 2009-05-21 06:47 PM


anticipation doubles, triples, quadruples time, my friend. Forget it and go on...suddenly it'll be there.

That applies to flowers too.

No doubt in my mind.

j.

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15 posted 2009-05-21 06:57 PM


nice
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