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rad802
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0 posted 2009-05-17 08:27 AM


The Wispering Dead
by Rick Delmonico

I hear their whispers in the corridors when everyone is gone
Some unfinished business here has kept them hanging on

Why should I let them mumble, what is their desire
Why should I feel the lingering angst they have to bare
What madness made this focused fit they feel transpire
What have I to do with them, why should I care

When this place was full of life I never felt the cold
In the corners of the room their murmured tales were told

Why should I understand or even want to know
Why should I show concern until they clearly speak
What madness made them stay when they should want to go
What can I do, if they can't find the thing they seek

The whispers start to build crescendoing, now that I'm alone
They won't accept my ignorance and so begin to moan

This holographic film replays obsessions so sublime
they're not here, like us they're echos down the corridors of time


Rick A. Delmonico

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-05-17 02:30 PM


Ghostly, but captivating, dear Rick. No doubt rooms full of life keep them quiet.

Loneliness and its consequences, well expressed.

Love,
Margherita

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