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Open Poetry #44

Waste of Humanity

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

0 posted 2009-05-15 01:40 PM

Your flaking skin so solemnly plays God
Blowing into the night, flesh peeling from below your eyes
In which a nightmare is bred, and Lucifer seduces ‘almost’ matters
From imagination to exaggeration, feeding off bits, but pieces
The life you left to perish
Born once again into the toxic waste of humanity

Emily Shives
5-15-09 Friday

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2009-05-15 01:41 PM

The first line blew my mind.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-05-15 02:40 PM

I agree with Kaoru.
Your work is intense and blisteringly vivid.

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2009-05-15 04:16 PM

Emily - A vivid indictment written by the ink of terror on a sheet of horror. It's just enough to blow any mind too. Yet, it commands attention. Intriguing. Namyh

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