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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-05-15 10:40 AM


I’ve had dreams of eyes such as this
Secrets the mind would keep from the soul
Reminds me of all the things I miss
Things not only need, but make me whole

Do not wake me if this is only a dream
Would love to revel in her wild abandon
Within these eyes, bottomless they seem
Would love to get lost within them

Trying to shake the vision from my head
As I see eyes that want to save me
Waking one who was here left for dead
And hope that they will not break me



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1 posted 2009-05-15 11:44 AM


Nothing better than dreams, you can do what ever it is you'd like in them, whatever it is you want can be yours...

Beautiful write, thank you for sharing.

Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-05-15 11:48 AM


Thank you K...this is why I live in a dreamworld.
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3 posted 2009-05-19 10:35 AM


I’ve had dreams of eyes such as this
Secrets the mind would keep from the soul
Reminds me of all the things I miss
Things not only need, but make me whole

Such escapes are what keeps us sane enough to face the harsh realities of waking... Beautiful write!! *S*

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