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Jupiter Kiss
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Jupiter Kiss |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Floating through your atmosphere Drifting closer to you now The slow passage of time The miles that feel like years Lost in the darkness Of the before and behind And melting like a wax candle Here in the void between Where there is no sound Only us burning bright You, pulling me in Closer as I descend To your gravity, I give in |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
You have me here; I can so relate. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Like the short and sweet ones and i like this one excellent poem Thank you  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
nice images! beautifl "kiss" ~~**~~ |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you guys very much. Osprey, how do you relate? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Until only this, the mouthed percussions of a kiss Inspiring for sure! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like this...very much....James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: yes, a Jupiter's kiss must be exactly like that.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And in such surrender is victory. *S* This is tender... and stunning! *S* |
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