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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-05-13 09:09 AM

Let me be your sixth sense
All five senses wrapped in one
Be all that you ever wanted
Be your secret, second to none

In your private garden
I tend the ripening vine
To ease the constant pain
This longing, yours and mine

To probe your depths
Utter fathoms explore
To take your tears
Turn into rain, I implore

Brush your cheek
With words from this pen
To light up your eyes
And never know the void again

Thus awaken a new day
Yield your heart and soul
To someone also left for dead
That now is made whole

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2009-05-13 09:12 AM

Enjoyed this, very beautiful.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-05-13 09:15 AM

Thank you, K.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2009-05-13 11:39 AM

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Brush your cheek
With words from this pen
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No better way to do it than with the pen. Much enjoyed this write and it's soulful purity.

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

4 posted 2009-05-13 03:34 PM

thats very nice.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-05-16 12:55 PM

This is beautiful. It hopeful and makes me believe.

Alison

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-05-19 11:25 AM

Brush your cheek
With words from this pen

So very beautiful... This is spirit-lifting perfection. *S*

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2009-05-19 12:52 PM

"To probe your depths
Utter fathoms explore
To take your tears
Turn into rain, I implore"

such sweetness....

very much enjoyed

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

8 posted 2009-05-19 06:14 PM

There is pain in these heartfelt words, but hope and much tenderness... in the longing not to live in a vacuum, but home in a loved one's eyes. I'm very touched,knowing what it is like to be in a room with someone whose eyes show them to be far, far away.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

9 posted 2009-05-20 09:03 AM

I'm sorry to hear that Lassy...that sounds kinda sad.
Thanks for reading and your time to comment.
I am here for you. lol

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

10 posted 2009-05-20 04:39 PM

This is a beautiful expression of the core emotions that define humanity.

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