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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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In the absense of color the trees in remiss of their sleeves the stones have grown cold and the waves are collapsing the gulls soon abandon the shells are set free the air loses touch to indifference as some struggle on to the promised land and some feel the lure of the sea [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (05-12-2009 09:09 PM).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
************************************* some feel the lure of the sea ************************************** I would fall under the above catagory. Beautiful read |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
me too |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is absolutely beautiful. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I want to go there!! Love your style, oh good goddess wonder!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Did you know that you whisper when you type? stunning dear lady yer gorgeous  and yes, some feel the lure of the sea.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The struggle is felt so deeply. Emotions flow abundantly through your stunning words, dear Michele. Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved this line: "the air loses touch to indifference" |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
In rise and fall, the ebbing of her beauty can not be resisted, desirable! |
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