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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
You stand there in all the pain The pain of a dead legend How much can you take of this? Can I make it better? Or is this a temporary disease Is there a way I can remind you of yesterday How much longer now? This is my life as it was meant to be Is this just a dream I have been sold? Or is a brand new day With a world of something new How much can we keep dreaming? My hearts stuck in yesterday How long can I keep living My heart is stuck with you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How much can we keep dreaming? My hearts stuck in yesterday How long can I keep living My heart is stuck with you This really struck a chord with me... I hope you find answers. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Life is a never ending lesson, journey. Your heart is stuck with the memory, and eventually letting go is all we can do. Nice work. |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
Letting go is the hardest lesson in life...the one that it is the toughest to master. This poem aches with that inability...so clearly. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
sad -Juju |
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