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Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
Posts 112
England

0 posted 2009-05-11 05:40 PM


You lost me there dear!
somewhere between the weather
and tv's greatest moments I went away.
Maybe in your zeal to control the remote
you flicked Me over to the other side
bewildered and without the tv guide.
I floated across the channels
until I felt the weather
smelt the newsroom coffee
and held the highlights in my mind
I ran unscheduled across the regions
rewinding all of space and time.
Yes you quite lost me there dear!
I'd no idea of the time.


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-05-11 05:51 PM


"You lost me there dear!
somewhere between the weather
and tv's greatest moments I went away.
Maybe in your zeal to control the remote
you flicked Me over to the other side
bewildered and without the tv guide."

~ At least you maintained your sense of humour! Clever write!


EA

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-05-12 02:10 AM


Clever indeed.
           Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-05-14 08:30 PM


Enjoyed...James
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2009-05-15 01:39 PM


so clever and probably way too familiar in many ways...excellent write...still smiling...

love this:
"Maybe in your zeal to control the remote
you flicked Me over to the other side
bewildered and without the tv guide."

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