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Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
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0 posted 2009-05-10 05:37 PM



forget sunset
lose the blues
smother the lover
in the smudgiest hues.
colour the perfect all pinky and panty
in shades of your dirtiest smelliest fancy
dilute the day with the darkest of night
and close up your eyes to the coming of sight.

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Grinch
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Whoville
1 posted 2009-05-10 06:33 PM



Thanks for the chance to read - I enjoyed this.

You should post more often.

.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2009-05-10 11:15 PM


Nice...James
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-05-11 12:24 PM


Spuddette - nice write, post some more...

BC

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2009-05-11 04:56 AM


Nice to see you back, Spuddette and in fine form, I see.
                               Ida

Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
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England
5 posted 2009-05-13 02:43 PM


thanks people. x
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