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PassionBerry New Member
since 2009-05-10
Posts 5 |
Tell me what I am without you I am a part of you you are my life all that counts nothing else I can't be without you I can't exist without you Who am I I am nothing I can't be I can't feel I can't breath I am lost I am falling I am nothing I want to cry I don't have tears too much I can't stand this I don't have strenght I don't want to have strenght I don't want to be strong I don't want to be ok I don't want to be happy I don't care I don't want anything only YOU you are my life How can I live You are my air How can I breath You are my heart How can I love You are my soul How can I feel You are me How can I be |
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greytree Junior Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 45Wales |
Remembering how to just be yourself after being a devoted part of a unity is the hardest thing I've ever experianced. But it get's more bareable with every day. In such an ugly time, beauty is the real protest |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Honest. |
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PassionBerry New Member
since 2009-05-10
Posts 5 |
Thank you ! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
The poem shows how we are stripped to the most basic emotions when we experience pain like this. Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
Self disappears.....so hard to find it again...especially when you don't want to. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You can do anything you allow yourself to do, but first, you have to know that you are you without anyone else. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I think we all lose this passion somehow. Reading this, I think it would make a great song. |
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