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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-05-09 07:34 PM

Bone’s Mom ain’t perfect—
no, not by a long shot.

She’s not always at peak
motherhood performance.

She sometimes
beats up on Bones,
and of course
she sleeps around
a lot.

She’ll sometimes drink
a little too much,
that makes her unpleasant
to be around.

Bones loves his mother dearly.
She’s the only one he’s got.

Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2009-05-09 10:19 PM

Fine writing...James

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2009-05-09 10:57 PM

I like how your words bring up images with out forcing it.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-05-09 11:02 PM

Thanks James,

I'm pleased that you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2009-05-09 11:03 PM

Thanks dear Juju,

For the very kind words on this poem.

Love Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-05-10 02:37 AM

Yo Bobby, Upsetting ending which recalls we have only one mom, it is so sweet and precious .

best wishes

yann

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-05-10 08:32 AM

Thanks Yann,

For the kind words on the poem. I'm pleased tht it worked that way for you.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2009-05-10 01:34 PM

Yes, we have to make the best of what we have, Bobby.
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2009-05-10 01:37 PM

Thanks dear Ida,

You have the right idea entirely Hon.

Love Bobby

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2009-05-11 03:26 PM

And mothers matter... even when they're far from perfect. *S* Well done, my friend. *S*

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

10 posted 2009-05-11 05:52 PM

Thanks dear Suthern,

Yes, mothers matter a lot, more than anyone for a bad kid like me.

Love Bobby

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