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Open Poetry #44

Allright Sara

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-05-07 07:19 PM

Allright Sara

Allright Sara, I'll agree.
I won't say you're a
good looking woman anymore,
instead I'll say that you're
beautiful and sexy, for
these are the words that you Sara
dear desire to hear from me.
So you are and so you shall be
in the words and thoughts from me.

Your legs long and soft and supple.
your breast full and firm and desirable.
Your hair, Sara let me run my fingers
through your silky Clairol hair.
Oh yes, Sara I feel your desirability.
Sara it seems that your sex appeal
has a way of convincing me.

JamesLee
07May
2009

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (05-09-2009 10:13 PM).]

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-05-07 07:51 PM

Yo James,

This is very nice. Don't you mean "your sex appeal" and not "you sex appeal".

Of course you could be writing from the hood. We might say it like that.

Bobby

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-05-07 07:57 PM

This goes through some passion in depth James.
I like how you roll it out there freely.

Very nice work!

Eric

Osprey
Member

since 2009-04-12

Posts 249

3 posted 2009-05-08 05:29 PM

I so enjoyed this poem, and the name is rather signifcant too. You may have been 'slightly' coaxed into a different description, but I think you just about got away with it.(winks)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2009-05-08 09:11 PM

Good for you James!!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-05-09 09:57 AM

exquisite and lovely, don't hesitate James and obey to desire. (smiles). Thanks for the poem which is quite convincing.

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2009-05-09 10:15 PM

Thank you Robert, ethome, Osprey, Blues and 2islander2...although I used a different name this is thoughts about my girlfriend...James

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