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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there were gingerbread clouds around in someone's indigo sky sighway and I could hear your comments though you were speechless lipped just smiling some kind of permission for my mind to wander up and downtown and your body was that perfect city I wouldn't mind the walking kind so slowly touring I was even dusty but you wouldn't seem to mind getting dirty we went to other places often then in our abbreviated discussions nearly scooped neck bosomy words seemed to take my smiles like capsules and bury them into day dream medications we sinned our healing with our hungry and hurried our hands for our hours holding them for each other's ease and letting them be explorers too knowing they could not lose their way since we gave them illicit instructions ___________ daark |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It doesn't get any better that that first verse. *S* Of course... in your poems, it doesn't get worse, either. LOL Fantastic write! *S* |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
just smiling some kind of permission ...echoing this..kind of a flirtatious line, really...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thanks babe! ______________ ms k...thanks for the smile ms |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Dark - I enjoyed the way this was written. It approaches the explosive but hangs there to tease the reader, in a dusty walking way of course. Nicely done Dark. Namyh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ok, it must be the moon tonight! Just contemplated and worshipped its brightness with halo in the indigo sky ... You seem to be in a perpetual rush of creativity, dear D.! This one too is spellbinding. Love, Margherita  |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
what if I wanted to be lost, would you find me on surrender road? Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
namyh, thanks so much ___________ ms mar, thanks special lady ____________ ms indi..try me babe,,dare you! thanks |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I have to wonder sometimes where you put yourself mentally to allow the words to flow as they do. Each poem you share is distinctive but has this wonderful common thread through them - you. You are the wonderful of your poetry. That's what I think. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you miss mod ali-san |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
burps and grins |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..now I will tickle you |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
That is no fair! |
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